We Come Apart

April 24, 2017
In a verse novel told through alternating points of view, Crossan (One) and Conaghan (The Bombs That Brought Us Together) introduce teenagers Jess and Nicu, who meet during mandated community service after shoplifting. Jess is standoffish, secretly struggling with her mother’s abuse at the hands of Jess’s stepfather. Nicu, a recent emigrant from Romania, has traveled to London with his parents to collect and sell scrap metal, saving to pay for his impending arranged marriage. Seeking connection in an unfamiliar and unfriendly landscape, Nicu is drawn to Jess, and as their tentative friendship deepens, they develop a bond built on a common heartache and hope for escape. Jess’s perspective is shared through uncomplicated declarative poems that don’t mince words or shy from her violent home life. In contrast, Nicu’s poems, while thoughtful, are stilted, intended to reflect his unfamiliarity with English, “the tough watermelon to crack,/ a strange language with many weird wordings.” Unfortunately, it’s a gamble that doesn’t pay off, effectively reducing his character to caricature and undermining the novel’s empathetic intentions. Ages 14–up. Author’s agent: (for Crossan) Julia Churchill, A.M. Heath; (for Conaghan) Ben Illis, Ben Illis Agency.

April 1, 2017
Gr 9 Up-Niku is a Romanian immigrant who is constantly bullied by his classmates. His parents temporarily came to England so they could make enough money for Niku to find a suitable wife before returning to Romania. Jess is rebellious at school, and at home, she is forced to witness-and often videotape-her mother's physical and verbal abuse by her mother's boyfriend. Following their separate arrests for shoplifting, the two teens form an unexpected bond during their mandated community service, with each trying to protect the other. Told in verse through alternating viewpoints, this is a powerful novel about how friendship and love are sometimes not enough to ensure a happy-ever-after ending. Each character has a distinct voice and way of looking at the world. Niku's chapters reflect his unfamiliarity with the English language, and through his observations, readers see him struggle to express himself clearly, especially to the other students and adults who are already judging him. Jess's verses have a sharper edge to them and are very matter-of-fact, particularly when describing her interactions with her mother's boyfriend. The conclusion, which doesn't wrap up definitively, feels authentic and may lead readers to think about the characters' futures. VERDICT A fast-paced and memorable story that will resonate with teens. A strong choice for most YA shelves.-Marissa Lieberman, East Orange Public Library, NJ

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April 1, 2017
Two teens with bad lives connect.Nicu arrived in "London North" only a month ago. He and his parents came from Romania because now that Nicu is a grown man at age 15, his father must earn money to pay for an arranged bride for Nicu back in Romania (against Nicu's wishes). Jess has always lived in North London, trapped by a stepfather who beats her mother and makes Jess record it on his phone. The two underdogs meet in a community service program for kids caught stealing and share a mild romance born of desperation. In alternating chapters, they each narrate in first-person free verse. Jess, who's white, narrates in standard English with touches of vernacular to convey her class. Nicu, who's Roma and brown-skinned, narrates in an unrealistic and dehumanizing broken English ("Her touching help peace my mental / and my body"). It's meant to show that English is new to him, but the use of broken language for thoughts inside his head is sharply belittling, precludes nuanced characterization, and is also incongruent with the use of standard English for his parents' dialogue, also presumably "translated" from Romanian for readers' benefit. This, along with Nicu's lack of grooming and unexplained misordering of weekdays, renders Nicu the cheapest stereotype, nullifying the authors' attempts to confront racism in their plot about bigotry, which includes anti-Roma slurs (as well as Islamophobic and pro-Brexit ones), violence, and injustice. Addresses persecution while reinforcing it. Skip. (Verse fiction. 14-16)

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May 15, 2017
Grades 9-12 Some books begin mired in sadness and move to hope. This is not one of them. London teen Jess is living with her mother and her mother's abusive boyfriend, Terry, who makes Jess take videos as he beats up her mom. Nicu is a Romanian whose parents are scraping up enough money to go home and get him a bride. Told in alternating chapters, this novel in verse chronicles the teens' meeting as they do community service for petty crimes. An unlikely friendship develops, fraught with ambiguity even as seeds of love take root. Things come to a head when Terry's attention turns to Jess, and Nicu learns a date has been set for him to return home and marry. All this necessitates an escape plan that goes horribly wrong. Jess is a strong character with a bitter edge, and readers will appreciate how the softer Nicu earns her trust (though his first-person accented voice at times feels inauthentic). This crushingly honest story effectively confronts issues of racism, abuse, and bullying, while admitting that often there are no easy answers to misery.(Reprinted with permission of Booklist, copyright 2017, American Library Association.)

May 1, 2017
Two troubled UK teens forge an unlikely romance in this novel in verse. Jess, a jaded tough girl, nicked some cosmetics with friends who let her take the fall. Nicu, an earnest Romanian boy, impulsively stole a candy bar to satisfy his hunger. They tell their stories in alternating free-verse poems distinguished primarily by voicemost noticeably by English-language-learner Nicu's ungrammatical but enthusiastic (and occasionally contrived-sounding) use of English. Their crimes lead to community service detail, where Nicu is drawn to Jess: She seem lonely. / She seem lost. / She seem total tragic sad. / And I want to rush to her feelings. Jess is at first dismissive of the immigrant gypsy boy, but eventually she softens to his good-natured company. Their connection deepens slowly and quietly, becoming a sweet and uncomplicated bond that offers relief from their painful private lives: Jess is a victim of her stepfather's sadistic whims, and Nicu's domineering parents are pushing him into an arranged marriage. While Jess finally stands up for Nicu in the face of her bigoted friends, her transformation seems minor compared to the abrupt and tender sacrifice Nicu makes for her at the end of their brief time together. This contemporary star-crossed love affair is convincing and movingand also a heartbreakingly timely portrayal of discrimination and bullying in Brexit-era London. jessica tackett macdonald

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